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The Bliss Under the Whisper of the Rain

02 Apr

No need looking for a shelter 
The nature’s giving you a kiss 
Wait for the end of pelter 
Feel in the rain the pure bliss.  

No need for getting quite wet 
Settle on an edge of waterwall 
Don’t be afraid of wind’s onset 
Enjoy that voice of rainfall. 

                                                                                                      No need for any fleeting thoughts 
                                                                                                         Just free your mind along with this   
                                                                                                     Forget all that annoying oughts 
                                                                                                    Feel in the rain the pure bliss.

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252 responses to “The Bliss Under the Whisper of the Rain

  1. OléVolta

    03/04/2012 at 4:07 pm

    Beautiful poem! Looks like the first post. Welcome to wordpress!!! 😀

     
  2. eldinsmille

    03/04/2012 at 4:17 pm

    I like the style!

     
  3. Obscured Dreamer

    03/04/2012 at 4:27 pm

    Now, I want to dance in the rain!

     
  4. Laura

    03/04/2012 at 4:29 pm

    Beautiful poem!
    I love to shower in the rain. Thankfully I live a ways away from other people in my Tiny House, so I don’t cause too much chaos. One smells heavenly after a rain shower. Cool and light. It is a wondrous thing.
    The rain is blissful, you are right.
    Laura

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      03/04/2012 at 4:57 pm

      Hope you’ll get a gentle kiss of phenomenon we both adore next time.

       
  5. S. L. Bond

    03/04/2012 at 4:56 pm

    Beautiful! You capture quite perfectly why I love rain so much. It’s so peaceful and freeing.

     
  6. swimming5

    03/04/2012 at 5:25 pm

    love it

     
  7. katsklein

    03/04/2012 at 6:22 pm

    lovely. I remember feeling like this about rain as a child. It seemed special. Now we all just snipe about the inconvenience and rush to cover.

     
  8. julibre

    03/04/2012 at 6:26 pm

    Living in Seattle I get my share of bliss, I mean it, the rain can be so gentle and beautiful here 🙂
    lovely poem.

     
  9. Felix Pearce

    03/04/2012 at 6:28 pm

    I’ve always loved being out in rain 🙂 Thankyou for the like!

     
  10. carolisle

    03/04/2012 at 6:31 pm

    Had me at the title!

     
  11. Monica

    03/04/2012 at 6:42 pm

    Lovely, Guy — in the West, rain is bliss

     
  12. Arret Facultatif

    03/04/2012 at 6:46 pm

    Wow! Great poem!

     
  13. annisik51

    03/04/2012 at 6:51 pm

    I like your poetry. Mr Death! Is that a very young Bob Dylan holding the ‘Get Born’ sign?
    Thanks for visiting my blog.

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      03/04/2012 at 7:02 pm

      Thanks! He photographed incredibly inspiring on this photo, didn’t he?

       
  14. michellebloom

    03/04/2012 at 6:51 pm

    i just love this one!

     
  15. deanjbaker

    03/04/2012 at 7:16 pm

    good to find your blog, and this work

     
  16. Jan Fishler

    03/04/2012 at 7:52 pm

    Keep writing Guy…very nice poems.

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      03/04/2012 at 8:53 pm

      It’s quite easy. All I need are head in air and my fingers on a keyboard.

       
  17. Judy

    03/04/2012 at 8:29 pm

    I love walking in a mist. So purifying. Lovely poem

     
  18. ClownPonders

    03/04/2012 at 9:03 pm

    I love this piece, really enjoyed it! Well done!

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      03/04/2012 at 9:09 pm

      Very nice of you. Hope You’ll fancy my future works.

       
      • ClownPonders

        03/04/2012 at 9:12 pm

        I will make sure I make time to read any new work you publish! I look forward to them!

         
  19. mypastmademe

    03/04/2012 at 10:14 pm

    Love this … very uplifting 🙂

     
  20. Purely.. Kay

    03/04/2012 at 10:34 pm

    This was so beautiful to read. You definitely have an amazing talent

     
  21. ninepublishing

    04/04/2012 at 12:09 am

    A nice reminder that rain is a good thing, although being from Washington State sometimes I would like a little less. Good job!

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 6:58 am

      Thanks a lot! Perhaps, you’re just a little happier in sunny days therefore?)

       
  22. DannyBoy

    04/04/2012 at 3:26 am

    Great poem! Thanks for the share!

     
  23. culturelites

    04/04/2012 at 6:06 am

    It transports you to another place. Sweet.

     
  24. zentango

    04/04/2012 at 10:41 am

    thank you for “liking” our post in Today In Tango…come visit us in Rome some day

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 11:02 am

      I wish I saw the Eternal City..

       
      • EilisDoe

        16/05/2012 at 7:23 am

        You can come and visit also Venice, I have a little house there, I use it when I go that amazing scene ….. and the possibility to organize an event only for you! Whay not?

         
  25. Nella

    04/04/2012 at 11:21 am

    Such a beautiful poem, with a tinge of sadness…

     
  26. ourjourneybits

    04/04/2012 at 1:41 pm

    Thanks for the like. Just so happens to be raining here in LA! I have a new perspective of the rain now!

     
  27. merry

    04/04/2012 at 1:43 pm

    Thank you for liking my post. Because of that I’ve learned somebody here writing such beautiful poems 🙂

     
  28. sherrylcook

    04/04/2012 at 1:52 pm

    Beautiful poetry……

     
  29. bestillandknow101

    04/04/2012 at 2:22 pm

    Guy, I like your thoughts today. All the facets of rain, from nurturing to reflecting, all bring life to life. Jack

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 2:29 pm

      I enjoyed reading your writing and your comment.

       
  30. Sajeevs blog

    04/04/2012 at 2:28 pm

    She rains from the skies~Showering myriad pearl drops~Outpouring of joy #haiku. You have painted such a wonderful picture of the rain – bliss:)

     
  31. cloudfactor5

    04/04/2012 at 2:29 pm

    Beautiful presentation of wonderful poem and inspiring picture! Poem On! Also Thank You for visiting my blog!

     
  32. theprfssnlcynic

    04/04/2012 at 3:53 pm

    Nice read Guy. It’s refreshing how you write with such composure and placidity. It makes me feel envious.
    *ps *thanks for visiting my blog

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 5:29 pm

      You’ve defined my condition that writing day exactly. Thank you.

       
  33. Lynne Ayers

    04/04/2012 at 4:06 pm

    I love the title of your blog and the title of this post also strikes a chord in me. I enjoyed the verse – Did you also do the painting?

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 5:34 pm

      The title is the creation of the friend of mine. And the picture…I haven’t found the name of the artist.

       
  34. vwmx

    04/04/2012 at 4:53 pm

    love it !

     
  35. artprojecta

    04/04/2012 at 4:54 pm

    I love your insight and talent, beautiful! Thank you for liking the ARTprojectA blog, I appreciate it!

     
  36. midnighthues

    04/04/2012 at 5:13 pm

    Lovely poetry!!!

     
  37. midnighthues

    04/04/2012 at 5:21 pm

    Simple things bring so much joy…enjoying the nature can relieve us of many unknown maladies of the mind! We tend to overlook many beatiful things in our mechanical existence…
    ~Aparna

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 5:43 pm

      That moment I felt..free, I think. It’s not a word to toss away these days, but…

       
  38. Casey B

    04/04/2012 at 5:48 pm

    I adore this poem! Thank you very much for showing your support by liking my post.

    Best wishes,

    Casey

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 5:53 pm

      I am grateful to you for your kind comment.

       
  39. cooleur

    04/04/2012 at 6:01 pm

    Great poem.

     
  40. The Over-Caffeinated Entrepreneur

    04/04/2012 at 6:19 pm

    I love your work. I write a bit of dark poetry, which I do not share. Your message is loud and clear, and deserves a wide audience. Good writing!

     
  41. cclody

    04/04/2012 at 6:58 pm

    I’m a new fan Guy! Elegant…I can almost feel the rain. It truly is amazing that poetry distils experiences down to its “pure” essence allowing those who appreciate it to unwrap it for hours.
    Don’t stop!
    Peace,
    Chris

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 7:00 pm

      Almost feel? That’s my failure) Thanks a lot, Chris!

       
      • cclody

        04/04/2012 at 7:04 pm

        Did I say almost…err…I meant “fully” 😉
        You have a gift my friend that is a luxury to they mind.

         
  42. Yoshiko

    04/04/2012 at 7:11 pm

    Beautiful expression of a poem about the rain.

     
  43. ashazenzi

    04/04/2012 at 7:16 pm

    this poem is perfect. now i wish it would rain 🙂

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 7:20 pm

      It will rain. Just don’t forget to enjoy it.

       
  44. blessedbebeth

    04/04/2012 at 7:47 pm

    I too consider death an inspiring playmate. Looking forward to reading more from you.

     
  45. SvetlanaHillKovich

    04/04/2012 at 7:54 pm

    Amazing painting!

     
  46. lidipiri

    04/04/2012 at 8:01 pm

    Wonderful words. Lovely title to the post, one that led me to it.

     
  47. himanshusahay23

    04/04/2012 at 8:43 pm

    Beautifully composed. Simple yet powerful in depiction. 🙂

     
  48. himanshusahay23

    04/04/2012 at 8:47 pm

    You’ve been here for less tgan a week and you’ve got a greater audience than most established bloggers; how did you achieve this?

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 8:56 pm

      There are some pieces of advice for the beginners. I’ve just followed them)

       
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 9:39 pm

      Just communicate with the others actively. I know that it isn’t smth concrete. But as a matter of fact, I’m an abstract being, aren’t I?

       
  49. timruane24

    04/04/2012 at 8:56 pm

    Wonderful blog.

     
  50. sholashade

    04/04/2012 at 8:57 pm

    Simply beautiful poetry. When I grow up I wanna be like you!

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 8:59 pm

      Just don’t be in a hurry to grow up)

       
      • sholashade

        04/04/2012 at 9:30 pm

        Well , i won’t but I still wanna write as well as you do!

         
    • Guy Nickwell

      04/04/2012 at 9:43 pm

      Hope you’ll create better things, than I do.

       
  51. lise13

    04/04/2012 at 9:56 pm

    Wow, I love this poem. Thanks for liking my latest post and giving me the directions to get to yours, its amazing. I look forward to reading more from you.

     
  52. SummerSolsticeGirl

    04/04/2012 at 10:29 pm

    I love rain

     
  53. SummerSolsticeGirl

    04/04/2012 at 10:32 pm

    Is the art yours as well?

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      05/04/2012 at 4:55 pm

      No, it’s not. I didn’t find the painter’s name.

       
  54. Kathryn

    04/04/2012 at 11:16 pm

    I do enjoy the voice of rainfall–and living in places that have distinctively potent rains, I respect it too!
    Kathryn

     
  55. kginesbock

    05/04/2012 at 12:53 am

    I love it!

     
  56. In Search of Perfect

    05/04/2012 at 12:55 am

    Hi Guy!

    Thank you for visiting my blog. Beautiful poetry and imagery – I enjoyed it! Thanks…

     
  57. Elisabeth

    05/04/2012 at 1:29 am

    This one is beautiful! Good job!

     
  58. 23rddimention

    05/04/2012 at 7:57 am

    For five minute I was somewhere far away from this noisy world. Thanx for the trip.

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      05/04/2012 at 3:13 pm

      You’re welcome. Hope you’ll take this kind of trip from time to time.

       
  59. cerebralcausality

    05/04/2012 at 10:05 am

    Thanks for checking out my blog,
    I’m glad I have discovered you work

     
  60. Barb Drummond

    05/04/2012 at 2:02 pm

    Hi Nic, glad you liked the fairytale opus. cheers

     
  61. twa2r

    05/04/2012 at 3:47 pm

    Thank you for visiting my blog. I can’t help but feel your essence. What a wonderful way you express yourself. I’ll take some time and read the rest of your works of art.

    r

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      05/04/2012 at 4:43 pm

      They were created to bring joy. I’m glad you’ve got your part of it.

       
  62. Just!ne

    05/04/2012 at 4:36 pm

    Lovely. Simply lovely.

     
  63. reneeboomer

    05/04/2012 at 4:56 pm

    Thank you for the like on my post. Beautiful poetry!! Have a wonderful day. 🙂

     
  64. mdphotographers

    05/04/2012 at 5:35 pm

    Simply beautiful!

     
  65. booklovinggrandma

    05/04/2012 at 5:42 pm

    Wonderful, inspiring poem. Thank you for liking my post. Have a beautiful day.

     
  66. IsobelandCat

    05/04/2012 at 7:00 pm

    Thanks for the like! This is a song, surely? Do you have music for it too?

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      05/04/2012 at 7:04 pm

      I haven’t thought about that yet.

       
      • IsobelandCat

        05/04/2012 at 7:37 pm

        what are you waiting for?

         
      • Guy Nickwell

        05/04/2012 at 7:52 pm

        It’s so pure as a poem…I don’t want to disturb the harmony in it.

         
  67. Syed

    05/04/2012 at 7:03 pm

    You don’t have to get wet. Just stand by the waterwall. Wow!

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      05/04/2012 at 7:06 pm

      I’m highly pleased to know you’ve fancied it.

       
  68. Jessica Alden

    05/04/2012 at 7:15 pm

    Wow…:)

     
  69. Konstantina

    05/04/2012 at 7:31 pm

    So pretty, I love rain in the summer time!

     
  70. Cara Olsen

    05/04/2012 at 7:42 pm

    Favorite line:

    “The nature’s giving you a kiss”

    Blessings,
    Cara

     
  71. Writer / Mummy

    05/04/2012 at 7:54 pm

    Thank you for visiting my blog. I enjoyed reading your poem. I found some of the language construct quite unusual – is English your first language? (Apologies if it is rude to ask, I’m just intrigued by the unusual rhythms in your choice of words). My favourite phrase is ‘annoying oughts’.

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      05/04/2012 at 8:02 pm

      This question isn’t indecorous. I’m bilingual. It adds some savour to the poems.

       
  72. Laura

    05/04/2012 at 8:25 pm

    That’s so beautiful 🙂 I love your poems 🙂

     
  73. Carol Welsh

    05/04/2012 at 8:28 pm

    You write beautiful poetry…”the nature’s giving you a kiss.” Pure loveliness. 🙂

     
  74. jeanmcdaniel

    05/04/2012 at 8:51 pm

    How inspiring, thanks

     
  75. Stef

    05/04/2012 at 9:37 pm

    Hi Guy, thank you for liking one of my posts at http://smilekiddo.wordpress.com/ – I appreciate it! 🙂

     
  76. Brigitte

    05/04/2012 at 9:45 pm

    Lovely flow and rhythm. The use of ‘gentle’ words: bliss, kiss, waterfall, fleeting thoughts all add so much to the sweet emotion of this poem.

     
  77. billgncs

    05/04/2012 at 10:52 pm

    thanks for visiting bwthoughts.. i like the cadence of your verse.

     
  78. fiztrainer

    06/04/2012 at 3:28 am

    Gorgeous painting and beautiful poetry. 😀

     
  79. J West Hardin

    06/04/2012 at 6:06 am

    the mind at rest can float along like the destiny of spent leaves helpless on a forest stream. you create a lovely sentiment under the canopy of your words. thx for coming by my site….my own poetic meanderings are inspired by love and the situations i find myself in. think good thoughts 🙂

     
  80. Robert O'Rayne

    06/04/2012 at 7:33 am

    Nice verse, Guy. Keep it up!
    My favourite line is ‘the nature’s giving you a piss’.

    May god be with you. (Or at least you could’ve been with him, had not it been for you being such a cheeky sleepy ****).

    Piss,
    R. A. O’Rayne

     
  81. Winn

    06/04/2012 at 8:00 am

    Thank you for the like. I love this poem. 🙂

     
  82. robertjhorton

    06/04/2012 at 8:39 am

    Great poem choice – and thanks for stopping by

     
  83. evrybodylovesomebody

    06/04/2012 at 11:20 am

    It’s almost summer in India and still, I could almost feel the rain while reading this! Remarkable! Truly wonderful! 🙂

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      06/04/2012 at 11:25 am

      It may rain just in your imagination.

       
    • Robert O'Rayne

      06/04/2012 at 11:48 am

      If it rains in your imaginenation, then at least you won’t have to wash elephants everyday. The rain is a true blessing, ain’t it? The nature does give us a kiss and shower to those poor trunky beasts!

       
  84. Mike

    06/04/2012 at 1:45 pm

    Hi Guy,

    Great poems and I really like the presentation. Thanks for inviting me.

     
  85. StudioThoughts

    06/04/2012 at 2:00 pm

    You have such beautiful work!
    Thanks for the “Like” on my Midnight Moon post.

     
  86. tielag

    06/04/2012 at 2:56 pm

    Wonderful!

     
    • martabakgemuk

      12/04/2012 at 4:25 am

      eventough i don’t understand about poem, but your picture already explained it

       
  87. cricketmuse

    06/04/2012 at 4:20 pm

    Thanks for stopping by my post on Script Frenzy. I enjoy your approaches and imagery of rain “knocking on the roof”. Many of my own poems play with the various qualities of rain. Your photos complement your poetry well.
    Happy Pages,
    CricketMuse

     
  88. Ankur Mithal

    06/04/2012 at 4:35 pm

    Beautifully captured the elemental spirit of rain. No need to compete or fight for it as is the case with manmade resources.

     
  89. Tanzz

    06/04/2012 at 4:42 pm

    Hey Thanx for the like!!I loved your work and your pictures.Poetry is tough work, you write it so easily. Keep writing. And once again your pictures are beautiful, it brings a smile and a sweet hope!!

     
  90. Pawan Hira (awakeningpsyche)

    06/04/2012 at 5:38 pm

    Refreshing elements in your poetry about life….beautiful imagery you captured….
    and yes, it’s time to feel in the rain the pure bliss….:)

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      06/04/2012 at 5:43 pm

      Sometimes I think that the rain is the only frank and pure thing around.

       
      • Pawan Hira (awakeningpsyche)

        06/04/2012 at 5:46 pm

        yes it’s a part of pure nature….sublime and heavenly drops of love, I would say…we need to get drenched to free our heart and just live for the moment of happiness…:)

         
      • Guy Nickwell

        06/04/2012 at 6:03 pm

        You are a man of comprehension, my friend.)

         
  91. kltolsen

    06/04/2012 at 5:43 pm

    Lovely. Breathe in the purity of the cleansing rainfall. Lovely.

     
  92. chistery21173

    06/04/2012 at 5:45 pm

    Very beautiful poem. Rich with a bit of sensuality.

     
  93. Mohanakumar Narayanan Nampoothiri

    06/04/2012 at 5:53 pm

    We have got rain at my place at least seven months a year. I enjoy every drop of it… I use to travel miles on bike during heavy rains… I like it.

     
  94. ihaveishoes

    06/04/2012 at 7:01 pm

    Very nice poem. Calming. Thank you for liking my post as well!

     
  95. NeuroticDreams

    06/04/2012 at 7:07 pm

    This blog is wonderful, the poems, the mood! I also enjoy the visual part of your posts, you match them well. Don’t ever stop.

     
  96. Sarah Drew

    06/04/2012 at 7:11 pm

    Thanks for the post like! Your poems are beautiful!

     
  97. chasingtheperfectmoment

    06/04/2012 at 7:11 pm

    Thank you for liking my post.
    Your beautiful words and pictures speak loudly to the soul.

     
  98. halfwaybetweenthegutter

    06/04/2012 at 7:18 pm

    Absolutely lovely! Thanks for the visit and like on my post, it’s appreciated.

     
  99. flowerpoet

    06/04/2012 at 7:23 pm

    Your beautiful poem reminded me of moments of pure bliss as I was gardening in gentle Spring and Summer rains. Many thanks! Poetry is the highest evolution of communication in written and spoken languages. I’m truly delighted that we are able to speak this Language of languages. I’m looking forward to reading more…Shelley

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      06/04/2012 at 8:33 pm

      To tell the truth it isn’t hard for me to study and to develop this language.

       
  100. PT Macias Hot & Spicy De La Cruz Saga

    06/04/2012 at 7:35 pm

    Truly enjoyed the poem, very relaxing. Loved it. 🙂

     
  101. sumon108

    06/04/2012 at 7:45 pm

    Amazing ,Wonderful !!!

     
  102. margieinitaly

    06/04/2012 at 8:32 pm

    Beautiful! Thanks for checking out my blog too, Guy!

     
  103. Unsungpoet

    06/04/2012 at 8:44 pm

    This is sweet! I love the rain and I love the way you describe it here.

     
  104. Abraham Lincoln

    06/04/2012 at 8:52 pm

    I enjoyed my visit to your blog post. Nice work.

     
  105. 1stjoeyanna

    06/04/2012 at 9:13 pm

    You have a true gift! Thank you for sharing it!

     
  106. Simon Marsh

    06/04/2012 at 9:23 pm

    Guy: thanks so much your visit. Welcome to WordPress. I’ll be back. Thank you, thank you for your “Bliss” …

     
  107. project1979

    06/04/2012 at 9:33 pm

    I like your simplicity of the artwork combined with your words. Nice work!

     
  108. coop9002

    06/04/2012 at 10:00 pm

    Nice post. You have a creative way of expressing yourself.

     
  109. themindblowsbubbles

    06/04/2012 at 11:03 pm

    Thanks for the like! I love this poem, especially ‘The nature’s giving you a kiss’. Magical!

     
  110. mairmusic

    07/04/2012 at 12:13 am

    gorgeous photos– thanks for stopping by.

     
  111. gacochran

    07/04/2012 at 12:30 am

    Thanks for visiting my site earlier. Enjoying your creativity…bliss – let it rain.

     
  112. Katzeknowsbest

    07/04/2012 at 1:19 am

    beautiful!

     
  113. Grumpa Joe

    07/04/2012 at 2:26 am

    I am not a big fan of poetry, but your writing makes me want to be.

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      07/04/2012 at 9:03 am

      Perhaps, you should try to write some of your own.)

       
  114. patriciakirsch

    07/04/2012 at 2:42 am

    Hi, I love your writing. Looking forward to more. Thanks for checking out my blogs.

     
  115. brian222

    07/04/2012 at 3:53 am

    Too often I worry about how to make a good situation better. Thank you for reminding me that a good time can be right in front of me; in the moment.

     
  116. noelihebuzor

    07/04/2012 at 4:10 am

    Great poem! Inviting one to let go and flow. Takes me back to my childhood when we used to play, sing and dance in the tropical rains!

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      07/04/2012 at 9:06 am

      Oh, I wish I could feel those rains.) Thank you very much.

       
  117. riz

    07/04/2012 at 6:01 am

    I love this! And also the images you use with your poems. 🙂 Btw, thank you for gracing my blog with a visit. 🙂

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      07/04/2012 at 9:12 am

      Thank you too! I’m gald you like my poem.

       
  118. sarin

    07/04/2012 at 6:35 am

    Feel in the rain that little kiss
    Oh! how i adore this little bliss
    The cute painting does tranform my world
    Who is the painter, May i ask?

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      07/04/2012 at 9:13 am

      Unfortunately, I haven’t found his or her name.

       
      • sarin

        07/04/2012 at 9:44 am

        Anyway thanks for stopping by my blog

         
  119. matwadaword

    07/04/2012 at 7:14 am

    Wow, nice flow of words.. beauty has indeed emanated in your art. Kudos!

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      07/04/2012 at 9:14 am

      Appreciate your words.

       
      • matwadaword

        07/04/2012 at 9:16 am

        Truth be told, you are good at your work.

         
      • matwadaword

        22/06/2012 at 3:43 am

        The truth should just be told.

         
  120. Laura

    07/04/2012 at 11:58 am

    Reblogged this on Tiny House Ontario and commented:
    I love this painting and the poem too. both capture the feeling of rain in the forest.

     
  121. Cranux

    07/04/2012 at 1:43 pm

    The first two lines,
    “No need looking for a shelter
    The nature’s giving you a kiss”
    is the thought I’ve been trying to form of rain for years.

     
  122. newearthme

    07/04/2012 at 2:28 pm

    I’ve definitely been feeling a lot of pure bliss the last few months living in Vancouver! Beautiful poem! Great way of looking at the rain. Thanks for dropping by A ‘New Earth’ Me and liking my post, Guy. Hope you have a good Easter weekend. Keep the poems coming!

    Blessings,
    Janzel (newearthme)

     
  123. GriffinPoetry

    07/04/2012 at 2:49 pm

    The images, visual and poetic, perfectly compliment each other.

     
  124. Ben Naga

    07/04/2012 at 6:53 pm

    The sky rains supreme.

     
  125. Dawn Adrienne Taylor

    07/04/2012 at 7:37 pm

    Really nice lines, who’s the artist?

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      07/04/2012 at 9:15 pm

      I’m afraid I don’t know the painter’s name.

       
  126. Ray Laskowitz

    07/04/2012 at 8:07 pm

    Thanks for looking at Storyteller. — Ray

     
  127. mspoetryblogger

    07/04/2012 at 9:03 pm

    The image and the poem go hand and hand. Sheer pleasure!

     
  128. ReGi McClain

    07/04/2012 at 9:52 pm

    Beautiful poem! I must say, though, I preferred standing in the rain when I lived in California. The Alaska climate does not lend itself to tolerably warm showers, although I have chanced it from time to time. =0) Thank you for stopping by my blog and liking my post!

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      07/04/2012 at 10:21 pm

      Haha, tru that) But you don’t have to get wet. Just watch it.)

       
  129. srisarts

    07/04/2012 at 10:01 pm

    This is a beautiful poem 🙂 Thanks for visiting my blog!

     
  130. catherinebowman

    08/04/2012 at 12:21 am

    Wonderfully evocative. Beautiful picture.

     
  131. alayaopience

    08/04/2012 at 1:01 am

    Ah, the poet! I LOVE this one. I love rainy days, so of course… 🙂

    Inspired to put my poetry up… Thank you for sharing!

     
  132. floridawasp

    08/04/2012 at 2:57 am

    Thank you for acknowledging my beginners blog, I’m certainly not the poet you are.

     
  133. LA Edwards

    08/04/2012 at 6:16 am

    Thank you for stopping by and checking out my blog page reading “Belgium Through the Eyes of a Beer Monger Gone Mad: Part 1 – Brussels.” From the name of the post you can discern this is a series which will follow my husband and I through Belgium. If you liked this article please check out my series of posts which convey our travels through Egypt. Thanks again for subscribing. Happy blogging.

     
  134. Subhan Zein

    08/04/2012 at 11:26 am

    Hi there,

    I like your blog and I enjoy what I’ve been reading so far. Now I’d like to kindly invite you to visit my blog and have a joyful ride there. 🙂
    Have a wonderful day, my lovely friend! 🙂

    Subhan Zein

     
  135. mseilisoe

    08/04/2012 at 12:00 pm

    Reblogged this on ed4projects and commented:
    Sweet !!

     
  136. Exuvia

    08/04/2012 at 1:28 pm

    Appreciation is the rightful heir.

     
  137. twinklysparkles

    08/04/2012 at 2:40 pm

    Thanks for stopping by my blog.
    This poem has some lovely lines, a beautiful feeling, and is sensuous. I love the title.
    Best wishes on your blog!

    twinkly

     
  138. aesthetesletters

    08/04/2012 at 4:28 pm

    Wow, what a beautiful poem. Rain, I believe, is the most magical of all types of weather. 🙂

    ~Aesthete

     
  139. kerriehoskins

    08/04/2012 at 5:31 pm

    Beautiful blog, inspirational, artistic, just lovely.

     
  140. The Inside Voice

    08/04/2012 at 5:56 pm

    Feeling the Bliss of a rainfall falling on me… Hmmm, the only thing that comes close is a long, aromatic bath.

     
  141. irfriske

    08/04/2012 at 6:15 pm

    What wonderful thoughts for my day, thank you!

     
  142. ladylitigator

    08/04/2012 at 6:22 pm

    Bellissima poeta 🙂

     
  143. jcapz

    08/04/2012 at 7:11 pm

    Beautiful poem!

     
  144. alittlekinky

    08/04/2012 at 7:14 pm

    So Beautiful………..

     
  145. avicenna2020

    08/04/2012 at 7:35 pm

    Wonderful poem

     
  146. mandacat1

    08/04/2012 at 9:06 pm

    very beautiful. a pleasure to find.

     
  147. largehaveroncollider

    08/04/2012 at 9:13 pm

    That’s one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. I love and adore the rain. From now on, I will always refer to it as ‘being kissed by nature’.

     
  148. kidrose

    09/04/2012 at 3:35 am

    wonderfully created !!!

    you also love rain =]

    P/S: can I repost this? cause I really do wanna share these beautiful words. Will give credit to this blog for sure.

     
    • Guy Nickwell

      09/04/2012 at 7:31 am

      I’m glad you like it.) And of course you can!

       
  149. cuck0o

    09/04/2012 at 4:32 am

    im glad a I brought my brolly
    theres a lot of talk of rain.
    thankyou for the like.

     
  150. Sarah Martin

    09/04/2012 at 1:38 pm

    Thank you for Liking my post! Love this one! Keep up the great writing 🙂

    -Sarah

     
  151. spainandme

    09/04/2012 at 4:05 pm

    Come sunshine or rain, if only we could ignore the nagging oughts… Beautiful lines, Bel.

     
  152. apollorose

    09/04/2012 at 9:16 pm

    Someday someone might call out to me, “Come in from out the rain.” And I’ll just ignore them. 🙂

     
  153. PG

    10/04/2012 at 10:14 am

    it’s almost like the place where i always want to be
    the place that is quiet with only the sound of the falls
    where there are birds chirping around and the breeze making sounds
    the pitter patter of the rain drops and the leaves entangled
    where i can spread my arms without being scared
    and soak myself for as long as i am there
    i wish the place somewhere exists,
    it probably does for i nurture it whenever i sleep….

    like what you thought when you wrote your poem.

     
  154. Margaret Lynette Sharp

    11/04/2012 at 10:51 am

    This is a refreshingly lovely site! Congratulations!

     
  155. frenchfry36

    11/04/2012 at 1:15 pm

    Nice one! (and thanks for visiting my blog)

     
  156. xoEvelynOrtizHasSpoken

    11/04/2012 at 1:22 pm

    This is awesome, && all that have I have read over is quite intriguing.

    Thanks for looking at my blog =)

     
  157. 2carol1lacroix6

    11/04/2012 at 3:17 pm

    I love this poem. Man, you have a way with words. It’s aweswome.

     
  158. fitfallon

    11/04/2012 at 9:08 pm

    What a beautiful poem !
    What a fabulous blog . I’m looking forward to following you !
    Thanks for checking out my blog

     
  159. SELASIE BULMUO

    12/04/2012 at 12:18 am

    Wow! Almost couldn’t get to the end of the comments. Beautiful poems. Masterpieces, one and all. Thanks for visiting my blog. I am honoured.

     
  160. lawrenceez

    12/04/2012 at 10:16 am

    Excellent!

     
  161. dysfunctional unit

    12/04/2012 at 11:28 am

    Guy, thanks for stoppin by and checking out my site…it is often how I find new authors I like….this poem already has a lot of comments but if I could, let me add my two cents…very nice nature based poem, language, word choice, supportive of the “feel” of the poem, rhythm of the poem is set up nicely…through most of the poem…If ya’ don’t mind me playin editor (a postion I held for a poetry magazine some years back now) fer a bit though…fer me I would drop the second “the” in the last line from the first and last stanza

    “Feel in the rain the pure bliss” to “Feel in the rain pure bliss” I think this helps maintain the flow, rhythm of the poem

    Secondarily I would trim the last Stanza

    No need for any fleeting thoughts
    Just free your mind along with this
    Forget all that annoying oughts
    Feel in the rain the pure bliss.

    No need for fleeting thoughts
    Just free your mind with this
    Forget all the annoying oughts
    Feel in the rain pure bliss.

    I feel this carries the rhythm of the poem, started in the first Stanza, more smoothly through to the end. Don’t get me wrong…I think this is a solid beautiful poem, hope ya don’t mind me pokin at it…lol…jes ignore me if ya don’t like the suggestions
    Thanks again

     
  162. My Tropical Home

    14/04/2012 at 11:30 am

    Another beautiful piece. I hope you’ll keep them coming.

    Best regards,
    Mary

     
  163. mimentovivere

    17/04/2012 at 8:12 pm

    Wonderful poem! Thanks for sharing it to the world. And thank you, for liking my post 🙂

     
  164. 2sistersmysteries

    18/04/2012 at 7:18 pm

    Awesome!

     
  165. onthespotphotography

    18/04/2012 at 7:59 pm

    Very nice.. so peaceful 🙂

     
  166. Ben Naga

    19/06/2012 at 4:46 pm

    The pick of Ben Naga’s Newly Discovered Beauties for April 2012.

    http://bennaga.wordpress.com/the-pick-of-this-months-newly-discovered-poems/#comment-3576

     

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